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October 23, 2008 at 10:31 PM Michael Kubo said...

Ik Joo,

The plans are certainly more developed than what you showed at the last review. I appreciate that the drawings are more accurate, with the real program areas indicated clearly, and accurate building sections, etc. The organization also seems to have changed into something simpler than before: basically a linear building that has certain "bulges" or fingers along its sides, that accomodate specific program areas (visitors center, public service, etc.). This might work better than what you had before, but you also lose some of the potential to create shortcuts or "loops" between different programs in plan when there is more than one route. A linear circulation (a big spine with fingers on either side) is a very particular kind of organization for work spaces, but you may want to keep other kinds of connections.

It is not so clear from the plans just how wide this linear middle area is. In "Roof Plan" it looks like a series of thinner linear pieces that overlap in plan (the three lines with three different grey colors); but in "1st Plan" and "2nd Plan" the building looks much wider in the middle. You should adjust the line weights and the information that is visible (dotted in, etc.) in 1st Plan and 2nd Plan so it is more clear where the perimeter of each floor is, and how exactly the different floors connect to each other.

I am very interested in the new "cores" you show in the plans and sections: "visitor center core", "auditorium core", etc. Does this mean that you are using certain programs in these cores to create vertical connections that link the different open areas on each floor? This could be a way of combining the vertical structural elements that hold your megastructure above the landscape with particular programs that connect the generic or open areas of the plan. (Look at Zaha Hadid's Phaeno Science Center in Wolfsburg for a good example of how these vertical programs or "cones" can be used both for structure, circulation, program, etc.) But it is not so clear in the section, where you also have ramped or sloped connections between the floors outside of these cores.

I do think you can go much farther in putting more specific information in your plans, sections, and renderings. Draw the desk areas in your plans, so we know exactly how one circulates through the office areas, or through the laboratory spaces, etc. Draw the structural grid that determines how far your megastructure can cantilever over the landscape. Show us the real thickness of floors, walls, etc. in your renderings, which are now very basic. Draw more detailed sections of specific building areas. You should also start making interior perspectives or views from the site that show us what your building looks like from the point of view of a person, inside or outside.