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October 23, 2008 at 9:31 PM Michael Kubo said...

Peter,

While it is good that you have put your system onto the site to start deciding the form of the building, I am surprised that there has not been much more development in your system. It is still very close to your abstract study models, and it has not become any more specific now that you are picking which programs occupy the different areas of the shape. In your plan diagram (the one marked "First Floor Plan" and "Opening Spaces"), you have only put labels on some of the areas in between the wavy lines that make up your geometry, but we do not know more about how these propgrams actually work. Do private offices, multi-purpose, or cafeteria/kitchen need to have basically the same shape in plan? Probably not, since their program requirements are very different. In fact, the black line you draw around them may not even exist in plan, if these floor areas are simply filled-in holes of your geometry (look at the one filled-in hole in the model to see what I mean).

Where are your sections? What happens in the curved linear spaces that surround these filled-in plan areas? The fact that you have not drawn a section is extremely frustrating. You had a lot of hand sketches of sections that showed vertical circulation, how the walls would slant and connect to each other across the different floors, etc. But I do not see any of this in the project. At least you could have drawn these sketches digitally so you could put them into your CAD drawings and see what they would look like in plan, in the model, etc.—but you have not done it. If you do not take these sketches and ideas and actually put them into the project—into the real plans, sections, site plan, etc.—they do not exist. Right now, either you know much more about your project than what you are showing, but you have not bothered to draw it—or you do not know anything about what happens in the section, which is a disaster a week before the midreview.

You need to draw much more, work harder, and produce much more quickly. There is no section, the building geometry is exactly the same as what you had two weeks ago, and you are giving almost no information on how the building works in plan or on the site. Your diagram of small, working and large spaces does not help at all and is very crude. You will need to work much harder to have a project at the level of the other students by the midreview next week.