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October 23, 2008 at 8:17 PM Michael Kubo said...

Daniel,

The project seems to have undergone a good amount of editing/tightening since the last version. It seems more deliberate in how you are using the different bends and curvatures of the long slopes in the landscape to produce different connections in plan and in section. The particular connections you want to make (and why these are better than other sorts of connections, or better suited to different programs) are still a bit unclear—it would help to label the section drawings in your catalog. Are these just options/potentials of your system, or is each one of these different sections tuned to a particular relationship between programs you want to achieve? How is the sectional relation different between different programs, and why?

I also think you are at a point where the plans and sections need to start carrying much more detailed information about the different programs, so we can judge what these bends and connections are producing at a much finer grain. In your site plan you indicate "office space" and "research space", but what happens when you put in the actual desk areas, circulation pathways, private offices, etc.? Where are the other programs outside of the generic ones (office and research)—social programs, etc.? How do these relate to the office areas? The point of the project is precisely to explore new performances for office environments, but right now there is not enough detail to judge how these office spaces actually perform—we only know where they are located.

I think if you add this inforomation you will also discover that there may need to be much wider areas in plan where there are lateral connections, not just long lines of plan that only touch at a few points. Some programs might be better suited to a long linear organization, but others (like research) might not. What do you do in that case? How can your system accommodate much wider or less linear areas?

In terms of production, the siteplan and section catalog are fairly clear, but the wireframe views are a start only. Right now they do not show much beyond what the plan and sections are showing. They either need to be at a different scale (more zoomed in, not so far away from the building), or at a different angle (if you are cutting them to show a section with the interior visible behind, then the section should not be at such an oblique angle). In general the level of information in the drawings needs to be higher and less abstract—floors need to have thickness, building areas need to be enclosed, we need to know what is transparent, what is solid, etc.